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Preparing for Revised Presentations (11/19/20)

 Since we are required to get direct feedback from our parents after presenting for them, I decided to prepare for it. Looking back on the points I had noticed that needed to be revised, I first worked on altering and removing some of the content I had planned. The main purpose I did this was not because I would risk going over the time limit with the overall presentation, but rather making the content more easily understandable and to the point. I acknowledge the point that going into detail is significant in a presentation, but from my presentation, I felt that because I had made it too detailed that it may have made it unnecessarily harder to understand for the audience. Additionally, because I am going to be presenting for my parents who are not completely fluent in English, I felt the strong urge to make it as understandable for them to be able to get the best feedback from them. I have never presented an English presentation for my parents, so I am a bit nervous but am also eager to show them how much I have learned from Mr. Paterson's classes.

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